My dear... THIS ISN´T A HAIKU......It can be VENICE or any other place .... you´re nor referring to Venice but to the ABSENCE OF LOVE!!!!!!... Please, change it!!!!!You musn´t mention the word " sola" because the title is a word of its family " soledad"....
My dear... THIS ISN´T A HAIKU......It can be VENICE or any other place .... you´re nor referring to Venice but to the ABSENCE OF LOVE!!!!!!... Please, change it!!!!!You musn´t mention the word " sola" because the title is a word of its family " soledad"....
ResponderEliminarVale entonces borro este y hago otro.:)!
ResponderEliminarLourdes esta muy bien tu haiku , pero creo que se parece más a un poema que a un haiku . Pero buen trabajo
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